Tuesday, June 24, 2014

Draft (Version 3)

The third draft of the novel that is now being written and has not yet become a full version has a content that is required to be studied.
The background of the story is not colorful; betrayal, the female sex and youth must be known as the tags of the novel. Afterwards, the author as probably stated her own or others personal experiences!
But the draft is full of clumsy copying of such as the tale of pool, punishment (lockup!) and etc. However, the detail of this draft is more important than the general part.
Attracting investors from the sex industry for this novel has made this story to become a broad commercial advertisement for sex toys.
Another important issue that needs to be said about the draft is the revelation of code names (mostly female) and also the revelation of some truths; (documents that can be told only through "particles") and are rose through this novel.  

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